Brushstrokes on blank canvas

in #writing6 years ago

I feel strange lifeless and dull, like the power went out, or maybe it's the stars that did. You're gone and I'm here, all alone and it's dark. I don't know where, but you're far away, too far to see and I never learned from those mistakes I made. Yes, you were right I should have known exactly what to say. I didn't though, the words seemed too hard to find and so I didn't say them when they were all I really needed to make you want to stay.

I didn't know how to give, not nearly enough, or maybe I couldn't back then as I was too busy taking. You were the one, the only one giving and I was there just to take it, to take your heart, then just break it. I can see, so clearly now, it's like I found the stars and found out that I'll never be able to make it without you right here beside me. I want a second chance to make it up to you, to find you again, now I've found me. To make it about you...And me, somehow.

Brushstroke by brushstroke we painted our lives but the masterpiece was always you and I know that now. Vibrant colour laid down on the blank canvas of life you marked me indelibly but I pushed you away, in foolish pride. I know I can change, find the words within to bring you home to paint with me again someday. We can paint the picture we want to see, I can be the one you need and the me I want to be.

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Hey, @galenkp.

I'm glad to see that this was just a writing exercise of some kind, rather than a real plea for a second chance. Although, I think it's a good start, were it such. My guess is, there would need to be more than words. Time more than likely, and action. Lots of both.

Good onya for making us think it could be real, though. Genuine, heartfelt and brimming with regret.

I would hope that a long term relationship/marriage wouldn't hinge on knowing what words to say in the moment, unless those words are, "I have no excuse, I'm sorry." Otherwise, I'm doomed, because thinking on my feet in the heat of the moment is not at all my forte. :)

If this was a real world scenario maybe the person would not deserve a second chance...Words, the right ones, between partners should be hard to find and a solid relationship has no place for all take and no give.

Just my opinion.

It was just some writing and is not based on any personal experiences. Just stretching my mind a little.

This is very very sad...and dark and heartbreaking. And what's sadder is that often we don't get that second chance...:(
It's beautiful, though.

Thanks @honeydue, a reflection of my mood or maybe just some random thought floating around in my noggin. I'm not sure.

I appreciate your comment as always.

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I'm hoping you're not in trouble, but if you are, hopefully this gets you out of it. It takes humility to admit when we've wronged someone, especially someone dear to us. Hopefully they accept the apology and as we do better, we're able to move on together.

No mate, just some writing. :)

If I was I wouldn't put it on Steemit anyway.

I didn't figure that you'd put it on Steemit, but didn't want to look like a jerk if I just cruised on by. Glad things are good!

All good mate. Are you well? Stacking like mad?

I'm doing pretty well. I'm in a season of reflection and planning. Trying to figure out where we want the ship to go next. It's good to have a destination in mind though, or you just wander around.

I'm still adding to my collection. I can't stop. :D

A bit of evaluation and planning never goes astray. I'm adding to my stack little by little. Got a post going up tomorrow about it actually. ;)

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