STATE OF THE UNION (An Original Poem)
I’ve seen struggle,
know what it’s like
to be broken
it’s not just a token
of this imagination,
so counterintuitive
to get up again
but I walk the grey mile
force a smile for a while
basking in the same
fluorescent glow,
you know
from sea
to shining sea
I see girls and boys
so willing to sell
their souls
for a bankroll
what happened to
clean and tidy
God almighty
now this is democracy?
let the blandness
of our existence
leave its creamy
foam on your lips
like a scarlet letter
you’ll feel better
the morning after
mocha latte tips
warm sips sway those
voluptuous hips
to get you through
it all
hip-hop to
trip-hop to
flip-flop and waffle
so easy to grow
thin and angry
when the deck is stacked
or fat and dumb
look out psyche
here it comes...four more years.
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nice poem man. your good i enjoy reading this. interesting.
@ericvancewalton very good one loved it
story of @ericvancewalton amazing
With each line getting better
I really liked it!
👍great the poem @ericvancewalton
I was visualizing Eminem with this one.
Thanks, @gikitiki. The gif of the flickering light reminds me of a scene from 8 Mile.
But you know where it's from, right? Or where did you find it?
The gif is originally from the videoclip of Rubber Johnny by Aphex Twin. I love it. :)
Nice flow Eric! I can even Imagine a nice beat underneath these words...You got a little "hip-hop" feel on this one:) I like-
Thanks, @steemit-life! I grew up listening to early NYC hip-hop in the eighties. I wrote this after Bush "won" against Gore in 2000 it was reborn for me this year when Clinton "beat" Sanders in the Democratic primary.
Oiy, do I know that feeling. I remember Bush v Gore oh too well. And Clinton v. Sanders is more of the same. Anyways, keep up the great work! Let me know if you'd like to collaborate on some "Sound Poems". Check out my intro post for an example. I've been lurking on Steemit for a while now, but I finally made my first post today. Cheers!