Force of Nature
They built giants out of sand to guard their castles on the shore. Together they advanced to lay claim to dominion.
With every step they took she pulled herself away, but when she returned, her wave crashed down, pushing under their feet and washing over their heads.
She didn't stop there. She moved past the darkened shoreline toward their tiny kingdom, flooding their sand halls and washing their monsters away.
Sputtering, they crawled to safety as she pulled away again.
They stretched their young bodies out on the golden white beach and let the sun dry their backs until all that remained on their skin was the salt.
Their sandcastle ruins were forgotten as they gazed at her in awe.
Inspired by the 5 Minute Freewrite Prompt - Children provided by the lovely @mariannewest!
Sounds like a great day at the beach to me :)
It really does!
Beautiful writing, I loved!
This is incredibly evocative! What a powerful 120 words...
Thank you so much!
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Natural beauty is the best and really your words have expressed everything love your writing @ellievallie you surely have wonderful writing skills keep it up !!
So sweet! Love reading this. ☺💚
What a amazing place! This is express natural beauty .
I have liked it.keep it up
Great and amazing post @ellievallie!!
Thank you so much for sharing this post.☺
Good post, I am a photographer, it passes for my blog and sees my content, I hope that it should be of your taste, you have my vote :D greetings