This felt like the sweet-sadness of a Ray Bradbury story, and I love that. Keep up the great work! I'm interested in checking out Reversed Black Maria. I appreciate that you were able to pique my interest with the characters, and I'd love to read more.
Thanks! I have a new Reversed Black Maria novelette coming to Steemit soon. It is very high praise to be compared in any way with Ray Bradbury, my favorite of the grand masters! I am not worthy.