Rains / Reins
- Rains / Reins -
original writing & photos一
.Rains
.
Coursing rain
That directs the
Movement of a
Cloud metropolis
.
The flooding of the generator
Of my heart oscillations
With the crude facets
Of moisture glinting
In the subdued atmosphere
Of the mountain city.
.
Most rivulets bide,
Awaiting their inevitable
Evaporation, perched precarious
On a narrow ledge to celebrate
Their dissolution into ephemeral
Streams on glass pummeled by artisans.
.
The city turns amorous towards its own reflection.
.
The people snuggle into the belly of metal and glass,
.
They sleep while the rain whips the engine forth.
二
.Reins
.
I am witness to the captain,
The faithful aide, through lethargy,
The somnolence of brisk nether-hours of morn,
And frank uncertainty. For many before us
Have perished due to lack of wisdom,
Starved, due to lack of fortune.
.
Still, on we plow, and our beloved master
Flinches not in the winding passage.
He sleeps not, though we servile
Rotate according to our
Nebulous ability,
Fragile with
Mortality.
.
Febrile with compulsion,
Exuberant in our infancy.
The vessel is fortified
By the rapid decline
Of limitation's
Vibrance.
.
Our teacher reigns
In humility of fluctuation
Through tendrilled dimensions.
.
The captain roars
With the silence of dreams
& desire to steer the crumbling bark.
Writing & photos
by @d-pend
12/5/17
Photos takenWith iPhone 8+
The rain in the trumpet of the glass of humility comes down to the emotion of a burning word. Clouds send blessings - wet forests play violins in natural wonders - the silence of the mind produces the magic of poetic movements in the light of the ether. Thak you for amazing poetry and big support my honest friend @d-pend
Great rythm in your poetry. I will upvote and follow this. I love the flow of the poem and can even make a rap to it. The pictures reflect your point of view. We want to be out of the reigns but it is the reigns that guide us.
Hi @mineopoly, thanks for your feedback on the piece and your support. I'm stoked that you picked up on the rhythm in these lines! Have a great day.
Thanks @d-pend . You are very generous. Stop by my blog sometimes. I update a groovy quote everyday.
Febrile with compulsion,
Exuberant in our infancy.
The vessel is fortified
By the rapid decline
Of limitation's
Vibrance
Your use of words is amazing, even celestial, makes me get these goose bumps.
Im sorry i have been away for so long
Thanks @josediccus, and no apologies necessary, I'm impressed by your persistence :-D
Certainly you are one of the best around here.
Solid Poerty!
Thank you my friend, glad you think so!
Very beautiful this poem
When I read it I was at the same time giving it some melody
Yes really beautiful
Oh, nice! That's a great idea. I'm glad you liked it @salahchiva
Good poem.
Always beautiful
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