Was it enough, or too much?

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Was it enough, or too much?


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I.


Just enough
                        burgundy ink
only a touch
                           turpentine
          everything & nothing
ochre, cinnabar, paint thinner.

Graphite
                               (6 for 99¢!)
Erasers
                                (Sold out)
Charisma

Euphoric porcelain,
        fragile: indestructible.
Citric
Lioness—           fierce
                             goddess.
Palace walls tremble
her facial grimace.

Pulled out of the ashes
by a hand being
                    pulled by a hawk
Into space.
                                  
Our cells
Are unzipping themselves.

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II.


The connection.
                                    (Page 83)
Synthesis of human folly &
     the foibles of living stone.

                                  (Page 107)
The huntress & scribe, her
     bargain, re-articulated.

                                  (Page 215)

Every moment was
     artificial
          fluorescence
                saturated
                          toys
                 white
          plastic
Mirrors vomiting sex
    with that
            unbearable
                   fake
              smile.

Every second was
                         organic
                biochemical
          modulation
    incessant
Orgasmic microparticles
         with an
    unfathomable
charm.

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III.


Through dualistic constructs
"You'll have to
                  learn to endure
dualistic constructs."

             the teacher learned
                                to say
through pain
            the pupils, playing
                  with a ball
                of yarn.

What matter
Humans or kittens or
Fleas or reptilian mustard or
Friends or dehumanized foreigners
Were a splat on my
           TV screen mind or
     my rope of psychic entwinement,
the antenna of my
        exhausted profusion
(Simians, frogs in monk robes or
   an old store clerk, a rusted spork or
                swollen canned SPAM,
                        yellowed Andy Warhol prints
                  or bath bubbles, creature
                                               comforts,
                                   not-live-without-able
                                   imported luxuries,
                             fermented pickled caviar,
                     buried-in-the-earth-in-an-
           elephant-heart-for-sixty-days gourmet anchovies,
   fine products,
           silken goods,
                      masterful touch
              of mustachioed artisans)

To tell the truth, it was
          all well made, but
                   a bit too much.


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Written by
@d-pend
10/4/17

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Is it ever too much or too little? It is a matter of perspective? Sometimes the world judges too much so I say it was just right!

I'll say cheers to that! Cheers!

I was delirious when I wrote this answer so I definitely wasn't alert. Maybe I should get sick more often!!! :D

This is too little, but from everything I've seen the best is an old
gramophone.
For poetry I was left without comments.

Very good poem @d-pend

every once in a while you get in this experimental mood which excites me. love the art connection vibe with old photos! magic :)

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