My blue haired girl: 5 minute freewrite

crookshanks (48)in #freewrite • 6 years ago (edited)

He cast a quiet figure sitting there on the bench. Head buried in his iPhone like so many others around him. Lost to the world and everything in it.

She sat down next to him with headphones blaring. The faint crash of drums and strum of an electric guitar could be head from her blaring headphones. From her dyed blue hair and black leather outfit a fair guess could have been made to what she was listening to even if it hadn't been spilling out into her surrounds.

Loud enough to catch his attention.

The first thing his eyes took in were her long shapely legs ended by a dark set of boots. Up from there was the black leather skirt leading into her jacket. Long blue hair covered most of the face but peeking out was a mousy nose with a diamond stud attached.

Finally making it to the eyes, he was lost to the world once more as he fell straight into those hazel pools never to be found again.

An entry to the 5 minute freewrite by @mariannewest, promp nose ring. All votes, comments, critiques welcome. Leave a comment and let me know.

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6 years ago in #freewrite by crookshanks (48)

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byn (63) 6 years ago

Aw, this is sweetly beautiful. I found myself wondering if he was going to say something to her and then it ended!

I’m helping marianne out today and visiting freewriters, here is the prompt for the next freewrite!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-84-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-sound-check

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crookshanks (48) 6 years ago

Thats the beauty of the 5 minutes. Just get in as much as you can until boom. Time's up.

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snook (70) 6 years ago

this is beautiful!! everything about it is beautiful!!! You , with your words, had me right there with you looking at her and feeling what you did!
Bravo!

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