you and @tinajordan seem to have perfected the longer line - for me a long line is octosyllabic, but often my lines are only monosyllabic, certainly not fourteeners. You both like to narrate when you write. I find that interesting. Good work!
Thanks for checking it out! I'll have to check out yours too. I don't really think about the syllables when I go into it, I start writing and whatever comes out, I go with it!
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STOPThis is awesome poetry, thanks for sharing this!!!
"I hit the grass and haul ass making my way to the trees" - this line is priceless!
Double entendre. :)
i got that lmao.
Made me laugh :D
you and @tinajordan seem to have perfected the longer line - for me a long line is octosyllabic, but often my lines are only monosyllabic, certainly not fourteeners. You both like to narrate when you write. I find that interesting. Good work!
Thanks for checking it out! I'll have to check out yours too. I don't really think about the syllables when I go into it, I start writing and whatever comes out, I go with it!
interesting - I guess being Canadian and influenced by Cohen, Atwood et al, I naturally gravitated to shorter lines
Wow nice Post
Through all this, somehow you still impart a feeling of calm.. at least to me... :D Great work!
I don't really fear death. It is something I have no control over, it may reflect in my writing.
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Wow you've earnt the prize fund on this one lol. Not surprised either as the Wizard Diaries are fabulous.
Thanks Hope! I need to check back and see if you posted more zombie story :) I got to Chapter 5 I think.
I'll put another chapter up later today. I think that was last one I posted!