A 100-Word-Story-Competition: Once a Soldier, Always a Soldier

in #100words7 years ago (edited)


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Once a Soldier, Always a Soldier

Heavy sweat trickled down their whole body. One soldier already created a disgusting puddle beside him. Some were already numb from the pain they felt on their arms and legs. It’ll only be a matter of time before their spirits were broken.

“Mind over matter.”
The senior officer roared.
The words ringed on their ears. They must keep on going. It’ll end soon. Just three more hours to go. Endure!

“Are you a quitter?”

“SIR! NO, SIR!”
They responded in almost a screech.

“Don’t quit. Go!”

In unison, they yelled, “Don’t Quit! As things go wrong, as sometimes they will…”


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I am a reserved officer and underwent the ROTC courses. When I read that "mind" is the theme for the week, I immediately thought about our physical exercises. I hope you enjoyed my work! Have a great week Steemians!

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I love your story. The strength of mind. It keeps us going.

Thank you @henry-gant! 😊 Your entry is awesome as well.

Having been there (many years ago) in the British Army doing officer basic training (a soldier's year's training in 10 weeks), I remember. In gas mask drills we were afraid of drowning in the sweat trapped inside. Releasing the sweat was a serious no-no!
Your story brought it back very vividly. It was tough.
Thank you for your great writing again @krizia

I'm happy you liked it @ebryans! 😂

Many Congratulations, you have been awarded Third Place in this week's contest and 4 steem have been transferred to your account. Please contact the guys at Steem Trail to claim your 100 Trail. They need your Open Ledger Account details.
Thank you for taking part and I hope that you will enter again next week.

Thank you @ebryans! 😊 Thank you Steem Trail! More power to @writing-trail! ❤❤❤

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