Deirdyweirdy ZAP - 20180830t130826689z
He felt a splash on his face that he thought was water, until an explosion of pain ripped through his body, burning with a hellish fire. An acid attack the newspapers said. Random. Nothing personal. Could have happened to anyone. #zapfic
No big deal...right? Nothing worse than a "hellish fire." Man oh man, you are so good at this. : )
Really horrific!
A water of "hellish fire".
He will continue to bear the deep pain, and unhealed scars forever.
Although he was a just victim of circumstance, he may never forgive or forget his random attacker.
It's a really brilliant piece bro. Kudos to you
Many thanks for your positive feedback. Much appreciated.
You are welcome bro
howdy deirdyweirdy! whoa this is some real powerful horror movie stuff! you may have to switch from your light-hearted gaiety writing to another genre, that's how good this is, I could feel his pain!
a little too complex to do your own artwork on this one?
Light-hearted gaiety, hahaha, yer gas Mr. J! And yes, I couldn't quite manage to draw a splash which was the prompt word for this challenge, though the images for Zappl have to be original work, so the photo is my own. Thanks as always for the support which is much appreciated.
deirdyweirdy! so splash was the prompt and you had to use that in a story? who makes you use that? can't you just write what you want to write about? or is there some reward if you follow the rules?
I'm not a huge fan of rules. reminds me of government.
It's a weekly challenge to write a story in 232 characters using a particular prompt word and post it using the Zappl app. It's run by @felt.buzz. Just a bit of fun.
oh thank you deirdyweirdy, never heard of them but I never heard of alot of stuff on here.
Boom. Believable and brilliantly penned as always... You go girl!
Ah g'way with yer Plámás;)
Since you do the 50-word challenge, you should give the zapfic one a go. A story in 232 characters. The prompt this week is grave
Plámás!!
Love it :o)