#ZapFic contest - Be Wary of Substitutes

in #zapfic5 years ago (edited)

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This is an entry into @felt.buzz's ZapFic contest. You are challenged to write a story with 240 characters with today's prompt being "exception".

Here's the original post if you want to join in on the fun: link to post

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I followed the spell, with one tiny exception. I had to use bat blood instead of wings. Similar properties, so it should have worked.

I poured the elixir in the mouth of the excavated corpse.

The corpse exploded, chunks of flesh on fire!

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[credit@EdibleCthulhu]


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Wow! I guess the corpse become alive again! :)

Loving this.

Thanks, it sure wasn't the intended result, gotta have a dramatic ending, in a very short time frame, lol.

I found you! I will resteem. It's a clever story. Hard to believe it's only 240 characters. That's an art in itself.

Thanks! I always start out at least 500 characters trying to be as concise as possible, then have to go back and keep paring it down. Appreciate the vote and resteem!

I guess the exploding was not planned?

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Nope, the substitution changed the spell - and disaster happened!

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