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RE: Cliffs of Utpala (scifi story): Chapter Six

in #writing6 years ago

Hey @anzha, thank you for sharing your story, I love the way how you describe the internal fight in Kyra's head, it is like there are two people one says just leave Arjun there, he will be fine, he deserves it. But the other one very caring is thinking ahead that if something happen to Arjun she will never forgive to herself. Sometimes we all have those moment but unfortunately not many of us listening to our voices and we act emotionally and then we sorry about that.

The skill to be able to describe and to let people to think about those emotions reading your story is very rare but good writer if he wants to capture the readers have to be able to do that. Enjoyed reading :)

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