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RE: Whitewash -- A Short Story

in #writing7 years ago

There are so many things about this story that I love. I felt the disgust and anger that Stella felt for her uncle. Then I was shocked by the reveal that it was actually Devin (I immediately thought "oh that's why he didn't leave him anything"). And the way she changed how she felt about her uncle at the end. It wasn't forced. It felt right. And I was right there with her.
wonderful!
Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you so much! I love hearing about the reactions readers have, so I very much appreciate you sharing your thoughts about the Devin reveal. :-) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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