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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure 3: Beautiful Corpse, Part 2

in #writing7 years ago

Hmmmmmmmmm! Somethings strikes me when I got to this point "It was a lot of work to convince Vivian not to worry. She doted on Olivia the way Olivia remembered doting on James. She was somewhat touched but didn’t feel the same sort of closeness and worried she might’ve lost that capacity. Ever since James was taken, the desperation to retrieve him had slowly expanded within her, displacing everything else."she so missed james..I pity her..shez going through a lot..#sober#

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