I like the direction you went there - black op and such. Very entertaining. Also, I noticed that you are listing ongoing contests in your signature. The Freewrite House has a bunch too - just saying...
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This has the twists and turns of balancing of the knifes edge of action. At first, toying with a knife, waiting for an Uber, he seems to sinister, but quickly the reader is shown past the surface to the person he is. Very much seems like he just slipped the clutches of a very sticky situation, it's a good job there is somewhere there who is still watching his back. I wonder what fate befell the Uber driver who never made it, what might have happened if Anthony had waited, or accepted the coffee... got me thinking up all kindsa conspiracies now!! A very fun freewrite <3
I like the direction you went there - black op and such. Very entertaining. Also, I noticed that you are listing ongoing contests in your signature. The Freewrite House has a bunch too - just saying...
Phew, made it all the way down leave a comment for once ;)
This has the twists and turns of balancing of the knifes edge of action. At first, toying with a knife, waiting for an Uber, he seems to sinister, but quickly the reader is shown past the surface to the person he is. Very much seems like he just slipped the clutches of a very sticky situation, it's a good job there is somewhere there who is still watching his back. I wonder what fate befell the Uber driver who never made it, what might have happened if Anthony had waited, or accepted the coffee... got me thinking up all kindsa conspiracies now!! A very fun freewrite <3
Thanks. I'm thinking about turning this in my FTS ending. We'll see what changes and where it goes.
The old flame back to torment
I have come with the next Prompt