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RE: JavaTutorial #10 : How to create Maps Aplication (Google Maps in Desktop Version) with java using Netbeans

in #utopian-io8 years ago

Thank you for your contribution. Below is our feedback:

  • Your text has some serious language issues, please work on improving your language
  • The flow of your tutorial is somewhat inconsistent, many items or steps are missing.
  • There are many errors in the top screenshots of your tutorial, why would those show? and it might be useful to explain those to users and/or how to avoid them.
  • Your tutorial is labelled basic, yet you do not explain where portions of the code need to be placed, for example in the section "add the code to open the mini browser", whereby you also have an undefined variable called "a" which is nowhere referenced or defined.
  • Use better variable naming, a does not make much sense.
  • You mentioned many topics in the introduction, yet most of those topics are barely touched upon in the tutorial. I would suggest if you're not focusing on a topic, do not mention it.

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Thank you for your review, @mcfarhat!

So far this week you've reviewed 3 contributions. Keep up the good work!

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