RE: QUIQQER week in review - 2019 / 10
Thank you for this contribution.
Looks like it was a very busy week. It is great to see all the development being made, and you managed to compose a comprehensive blog post that contains all the necessary information. Keep up the good work.
Your review is informative and well-illustrated with quality images. I like all the information regarding the new versions, and I appreciate the fact that you took the time to share insights about your next steps. Your content is unique and editorial, and I enjoyed reading your work.
That said, there were issues of style and proofreading. Regardless, you did a good job, and I appreciate the effort you put into your work. I look forward to your next contribution.
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Thank you @lordneroo
Can you give me some examples or improvements what I can do better next time?
I always try to do this as well as possible and I want to get better at writing. Especially when it comes to English. :-)
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence is pretty confusing. I think you meant to write: "He knows much and wants to know more, and has the answers to even more questions."
This sentence should read: "So he tries to help you find the needle in the STEEM pile."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!