SteemApp adds exchange rates for iOS released TODAY 💱 - Powered by Blocktrades.us
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This is a very nice update to the app, and it's great to see the update roll out to iOS so soon after the Android rollout. I'm also very excited about the greater future integration with Blocktrades.us. Very cool.
The post itself, however, could have used a closer look as far as style, grammar, and proofreading. Specifically, I would advise using more commas. I'll use one paragraph as an example.
"We want this app to be a one-stop for our fellow Steemians where they can both interact with the Steemit blockchain and also be informed about what is going in other crypto markets."
This is a short paragraph, but it's a long sentence. It also seems to have a couple of words missing. Here's how I would edit it:
"We want this app to be a one stop shop for our fellow Steemians, where they can both interact with the Steemit blockchain, and be informed about what is going on in other crypto markets."
Notice I also deleted the "also" before "be informed." This is because you already used "both' earlier in the sentence. That way, you already indicated a second this is coming, so the "also" is redundant.
While it is not a perfect solution, I would recommend putting future texts through Hemingway to get automated feedback about the quality of the text, and highlights of places that could use some work.
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Thank you @didic, very good comment about comas. Noted. Right now, when I had a fresh look at the sentence I wrote, I realize that it needed comas badly :)
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Thank you @yuriks2000, I am thankful this great project is finally done and the product is now in our hand and moreso, free of charge!! These features will extremely help us b able to keep updated with the STEEM and other cryptos. ( Exchange rates of Steem, Steem Dollar, Bitshares, Bitcoin, and Ethereum). Thanks.
Thanks a lot for your comment @kiddady, we are working on bringing in a lot of new features forward. With your support and your help we will do much faster.