Wow, that was a harrowing flashback. I always feel tense at the sound of a siren, even though I'm lucky enough that the bad news has never been for me. I like how you incorporated its wail into the story.
Wow, that was a harrowing flashback. I always feel tense at the sound of a siren, even though I'm lucky enough that the bad news has never been for me. I like how you incorporated its wail into the story.
Thanks, I think it starts to sketch why the protagonist might not have wanted to stay within society as well!
It still needs a bit of work, but that's a given for each part of a book I guess, haha!
That's true, he had something to run away from and something to come back and face.
Quick question, how old would you estimate the protagonist to be in the flashback?
I was picturing him to be around eight years old, give or take a couple years.
That's perfect, thanks!