My haiku for... Mizu No Oto #47; English Edition [ENG/ESP] (poem)

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It's strange, but this week's image for the Mizu No Oto made me think about the media. It's the daily bombardment of anyone living in the world. A bustle, a tremendous madness that envelops us and drives us crazy in turn... A panorama largely foreign to those birds. Birds that are enviable for the kind of quiet (and free) life they can lead.

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Es extraño, pero la imagen de esta semana para el Mizu No Oto me hizo pensar en los medios de comunicación. El el bombardeo diario que supone para cualquier persona que viva en el mundo. Un bullicio, una tremenda locura que nos envuelve y nos vuelve locos a su vez... Un panorama en gran parte ajeno a esas aves. Unas aves que son envidiables por el tipo de vida tranquilo (y libre) que pueden llevar.


[photo by @marcoriccardi]


In your gardens.
I freshen up in the river
with gentle airs.

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En tus jardines.
Me refresco en el río
con aires mansos.

And I breathe the morning that peace brings, amidst so much turbulence...

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Y respiro la mañana que la paz trae, entre tanta turbulencia...




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Tu haiku me parece de gran sutileza. No sé por qué te vino a la mente el bullicio y los medios de comunicación pero si ello te inspiro hacia la tranquilidad y la frescura de las aguas... magnífico!
Ha sido un placer leerte @salvao

Hola, supongo que tiene que ver todo el pánico que los medios ayudan a crear en torno a esta "epidemia" de ahora... cuando muchas otras enfermedades matan mucha más gente, según la estadística. Gente con mascarillas (agotadas y encarecidas) por todas partes. Así que me imaginé a esos patos con mascarilla, preocupados y me dio la risa. Y luego ya me vino el poema. Ja, ja... Saludos!

Lo que estais viviendo ahora en España, lo estamos viviendo desde unas semanas màs ahì en Italia, donde los casos se descubrieron antes... parece que no hemos mejorado mucho en nuestras reacciones irracionales desde los tiempos de la peste.

I think in English it doesn't fit so great. It's hard to translate.
I find it a peaceful photo no matter the greatness in it (typical Dutch) and pigeons are the rats under the birds...

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Well yes, it's not easy to translate... but you know, I like to try! :)

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I can understand that. I joined the Spanish and it was quite a puzzle to translate it and made it both fit while different rules are used. It took me hours and I tried to translate it into a few different languages to figure out what was right, to figure out how many syllables a word has, etc.

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A new try. I do not know why but I cannot find the answer I gave you back. 🙁

I understand you like to try it. I did the same but it took me hours to find a translation that followed the rules. Those for English are not the same. I translated into different languages to check it and had to search for the right syllables as well. It was quite a puzzle but it keeps one busy.😁

Strange you can seldom see the effort one put in writing and publishing it.

I wish you a great Friday and good luck. 💕

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Nice way to describe the feelings of these birds!

Thanks :)

I often see haiku and "haiku moments" as short oases of detachment and rest from the confusion of life, as I think you did with this one.
"Haiku moments" include every time I don't actually compose a haiku but only enjoy the immersion in nature.

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