ARTQUEST-TRAIL#19 (ARTchallenge) - Story by @yusaymon

in #story7 years ago (edited)



He did not conceive in the meantime disaster in the house, toys watered,
It seemed an empty orbit without his childrens.. They had gone on vacation to their grandmother ...
Entered in the bathroom and saw his wife in the tub looking at him in a new and unique way
"What's happening, my love"
There was simply a perfect silence from those who delight your soul
He stared at her and slowly approached the tub
"What's the matter, my love? I'm feeling a little sad .."
"It's for the kids, right?"
At that moment unable to escape the scene was touching his lips
slowly
Magic the moment where a mixture of sadness becomes a love
Transparent and sobbing
It seemed to bloom again what was off
Their marriage was going through heavy bumps
And that night was mixed with an unforgettable utopia
In the bathroom together the smell of the vanilla soap came off
The smell of reconciliation
The smell of the present ...


No concibía entre tanto desastre en la casa, los juguetes regados, el trensito de juan volteado
parecía una órbita vacía sin sus hijos que se habían ido de vacaciones a donde su abuelita...
entró al baño y vio a su esposa en la tina mirándolo de una manera nueva y única
"Que esta pasando mi amor"
simplemente había un silencio perfecto de esos que simplemente te deleitan el alma
fijamente la observaba y se fue acercando lentamente a la tina
"Que te pasa mi amor? te noto un poco triste.."
"es por los niños verdad?"
en ese momento sin poder escapar de la escena estaba tocando sus labios
lentamente
mágico el momento donde una mezcla de tristeza se convierte en un amor
transparente y sollozante
parecía que florecía de nuevo lo que estaba apagado
el matrimonio de ellos estaba pasando por fuertes baches
y esa noche se mezclo con una utopia inolvidable
en el baño juntos se desprendia el olor de el jabon de vainilla
el olor de la reconciliación
el olor de el presente...


Thank you @aksinya for the opportunitty
Yu

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for some reason the picture brought Edgar Allan Poe to mind. Something about the bleak emotionless expression. Its beautiful really

Interesting - I like it!

<3 ur words means a lot to me

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!

Thanks to you @aksinya !!!! :))))

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