An amaizng piece.
I have my 5 cents as always thouhg =)
I read it loud and i would have kept the abab rhyme everywhere. Its almsot sonnet like. But some stanzas break the rhytm when read out loud.
In any case, a great piece mate (the ending rocks btw) !
I KNEW you'd catch that hahaha. I do try my best to adhere to whatever style I'm working with, but sometimes stuff leaks out the cracks ;) Thank you for always giving such great feedback!