For everything that you would need to know
you need only think
of all the world that you're longing to see
and need only look
For all the love that you're wishing to spread
you need only feel
for what lies lie hiding between the lines
and need only eyes.
The guilt then, to love, when love leads to loss
or loathing or lust
and the fixed stars of our intellect crash
against granite hearts
The years have eroded our sense of self
like storms on Venus,
so that in our actions and inactions
we chronicle life
mixed inside the collective unconscious,
known to each other.
The love then, in guilt, when guilt leads to love
or loathing or lust.
The stars then, in us, in our circling,
we need only spin.
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I am spinning.
Don't fall down!!! ;)
This. Is. Fantastic.
Thanks, I'm glad you found something you enjoyed in there :)
It's incredible. Thanks for sharing it!
Potent!
Really nice poem, I was enjoying the flow and word choice of the world of emotions you painted. Upvoted
Hey D! Sorry I missed this comment. I appreciate the compliment, coming from a talent like yours :)
You are most welcome bro, it's okay, I miss comments often too lol Appreciate your kind words.