In the third stanza I actually felt unsteady from the swinging pendulum motion. I'm often impressed by good imagery, but I don't usually feel dizzy just from the suggestion of words. Nice work.
In the third stanza I actually felt unsteady from the swinging pendulum motion. I'm often impressed by good imagery, but I don't usually feel dizzy just from the suggestion of words. Nice work.
That's awesome to hear, I promise to keep the wizardry to a minimum ;)