Hello! I really loved your story. It almost made me cry four times through, which is a record of some sort. I usually resent stories that try to make me cry, but not this one! 8-) I want to show it to the other authors on the Fiction-Trail.

We are trying to encourage great content creation on Steemit by building a community of fiction writers. On the fiction-trail discussion group, writers can meet other writers, get feedback on their work, and help others improve their skills.

I'm going to post your story there for others to vote and comment on, I hope it helps, and please join us for discussion and lots of great fiction.