A nice and funny story that can be told to children. Well written and very enjoyable. The moral: dont treat your son as stupid. It might backfire on you.
A nice and funny story that can be told to children. Well written and very enjoyable. The moral: dont treat your son as stupid. It might backfire on you.
Humbled, as always by your compliments. And thanks for the faithful effort to read and share your thoughts on each and every person's work here submitted under the story-300words challenge..
Some other person in your position would easily fall to the temptation to mindlessly upvote and just get done with...i mean, all these stories and themes and quality and ...under other circumstances, reading them would understandably take weeks! But here you are still managing .....It is not an easy thing to do.
It takes passion.
You are much owed @swisslive
Well I must admit, I am starting to get upset by the number of people who don’t have the imagination to think of a proper story. Worse there are some who are recounting what they heard in the church lesson
Hahahahaha..... That is your price for benevolence!!LoL
But just know your initiative here, has been the breakthrough for some of us.
We found audience, and moreover, earned.
I can't be grateful enough. Many out there, i am sure share the same sentiment.
Well, the church lessons are probably because a lot of people are trying to copy or imitate what you put as the first example : the story of Jesus and Pontius Pilate. That's something that really frustrates me....people not going out of the set examples or thinking out of the box. This story however was a breath of fresh air!! I was thinking it would be the dads arguing about whose son is better lol!!
That is always what is expected i agree. Thanks for the observation @simplifylife, but i chose, again, as you observe, to toe an unorthodox line.
Not an easy thing, especially in keeping up with the requirement to bring out a good moral-[The moral: dont treat your son as stupid. It might backfire on you.] as @swissclive so aptly captures. But i am glad you guys all think i succeeded.
I am humbled by your insightful commentary.