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RE: Short story initiative - A story in under 300 words

in #story-300words2 years ago

Great initiative! Thank you for thinking it up and thanks to @miti for sharing it with the Italian community: you might end up with quite a few stories translated from Italian 😉

I liked your story, too, although Mary comes off as rather harsh. I wouldn’t expect her to “snap”.

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@imcesca . Very good spot about Mary. I changed the word to "warned". You could be a good proof reader.

I hope you will particiipate!

LOL Editor is one of my dream jobs, actually (but I studied Law so I do other stuff) 😜