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RE: Steemit cryptoacademy contest/s2w1 - How Cryptocurrency has shaped the financial realm, what is it's future by @jammyroberts.
Thank you, @jammyroberts for publishing an article in the Steemit Crypto Academy community today. We have accessed your article and we present the result of the assessment below.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Verified user | ✅ |
| #steemexclusive | ✅ |
| Free of Plagiarism | ✅ |
| #Club | Club75 |
| Bot free | ✅ |
Comment/Recommendation
- You have shallowly given an overview of cryptocurrency and there are a lot of inconsistencies. For example, you highlighted that cryptocurrency was created in the 1980s, but that's not true, the first cryptocurrency (Bitcoin) was created in 2008. Likewise, you have shallowly explained the comparison of both assets.
- You have highlighted the innovations of cryptocurrency, major problems, and how they can be handled but all lack in-depth analysis.
- You have shown your trust in the future of cryptocurrency but the reasons are not strong enough.
Overall, nice try but it's not enough. First of all, there are a lot of typo errors in your content, I will suggest that you proofread at least one more time. You should improve on your markdown usage, and presentation and give an in-depth analysis. That said, you don't have to embed videos in your content for this contest. Take note of the corrections.
Rating
Total| 4.25/10
Thanks alot for the ratings and the advice, it's my first time writing a crypto blog post, thanks once again, this advice are very helpful.