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RE: Steemit Crypto Academy Contest / S1W3 – Blockchain through the concepts by @icon-monday
Thank you, @icon-monday for publishing an article in the Steemit Crypto Academy community today. We have accessed your article and we present the result of the assessment below.
| Criteria | Remark |
|---|---|
| Verified user | YES |
| #steemexclusive | YES |
| Free of Plagiarism | YES |
| #Club5050 | YES |
| #Club75 | NO |
| #Club100 | NO |
| Voting Bot | NO |
Comment/Recommendation
- Proof of Stake is one of the consensus mechanisms used in the blockchain realm for validations and security. You explanation is good but shallow.
- While talking about the importance of PoS, you switched to talking about DPoS which involved voting delegates. You should stay focused. Also, the blockchain would exist without PoS, it's just one of the consensus mechanisms, and that makes your point invalid.
- Your response on how the concept can be improved is not valid. It lacks quality analysis..
Overall, nice try but not enough. Your article appeared to have used an online engine to twist words, you should have worked on getting the concept right instead and improve the quality of analysis.
Rating
Total| 3.5/10
Nice work 👍👍 very informative
Thanks for the corrections, I will try harder next time