@rhondak, is one of the leading members of the Fiction Writers Workshop on steemit, they offer assistance in writing curating editing, and if you have finished works of publishing I believe. You might want to check her page out and scroll and find one of the SFT or the @thewritersblock post that she resteems. She is a pretty nice and helpful person especially when it comes to writers.
          I like back and forth story banter but it is hard to make it look good on steemit so when editing/posting you need to take a quick glance at the preview box before hitting the enter key to see that it is as readable on steemit as you can make it.
          If it is hard to read then people will not read it. I suggest looking at a few of the other stories on steemit and see what posting techniques they use. For short rapid reading with a lot (at times) back and forth character banter, try @everittdmickey' Soul Stone stories or one of the other many that he post, For thick paragraph reads @alexbeyman has a very good technique, I would try to explain them but in all honesty I could not, those two have lot different "style" but both are easy on the eye reads as are many that have been posting stories on steemit.
          On my master banner post link I have links to about 38 Authors on steemit.