Hi @sharmili, thank you for participating in the "Week-02: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Travel Diary."

Reading through your travel diary is focused on visiting the river bank .Giving a discription of the river bank, the beauty and the nature that surround the area .

My observation is that you don’t understand the meaning of travel diary, your writeup is more of a simple diary not travel diary .We are expecting to know your travel experience and places you visited ,means of transport and what happened . Also, you didn’t mentioned the date of your travel diary making it difficult for us to know which particular day you are writing about.Mark down not applied as well.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 03marks
• Following the rules: 1 marks
• Markdown Usage: 0.5mark
• Comments: 1 Mark

Scores| 5.5/10