my Grading System

Thank you for your entry. I am glad to read about your big family.

But you need to write in line with the topic of the challenge and follow the tasks accordingly. For instance

• I can't tell what family milestones your family is celebrating

• I can't tell the chosen activity

• I can tell how it was done

• There is no details in your presentation and the images aren't representing what you are writing about. Hope you will improve