Hi @eglis, thank you for participating in the "Week-03: "Today's Writing, Tomorrow's Memories."—Health Diary."

Hello, reading through your health I can see as a mother you are facing health challenges because of tachycardia giving you anxiety and loss of appetite for some day .It has not been easy inspite that you play a role of a mother by taking care of the children.Making sure your kids go on school and get back home early as well. Your decision of visiting a psychologist is very perfect .Making some exercises to relieve some stress from the body .Later, you both a tube medicine for flu affecting you and you kids .I wish you a quick recovery 🙏

My observation is that you didn’t include the date of your health diary in your write up.The rules of the challenge gave date limit for challenges .Not writing date makes it difficult for us to grade you , because you might be writing out date .Also, the presentation of your health diary is worth interesting to read , But ,I was expecting from your health challenge you can advise us health wise how to over come this illness and give some health tips remedies .It shows you have been visiting the doctor , why not mentioned some health tips from your experience to stay health . Things you can do or avoid.Meaning bring specific example for exam like food quantity of what to consume,water quantity of water, the type of excercise on can carry on.

. We have assessed your assignment post , below captures our assessments.

Criteria	Remark
Real user	✔️
#steemexclusive	✔️
Free of Plagiarism	✔️
AI Article	(Human text!)
Bot free	✔️

Comment/Recommendation

• The beauty of diary writing: 4.5 marks
• Following the rules: 1.5 marks
• Markdown Usage: 1 mark
• Comments: 1 Mark

Scores| 8/10