Love the edit! We do some action sports edits also, but from the whitewater rafting world. Our team's advice would be to slomo some of the crux moves in your edits. When you are gapping something or when you are jibbing off a tree for example. Slowing down the action would draw the viewer deeper into the edit by holding their attention on the crux move longer. Another recommendation would be to shoot lower beneath the action and at a steeper vertical angle to give the viewer more perspective since the camera has a tendency to flatten everything out. Over the camera action with the videographer following the subject are cool too if you have someone willing to sit near the base of the jump. It is a bit of a tricky and dangerous shot, but it really pays off if there is someone willing to post up there for your shot. Just some thoughts from our team on the Edit, but we really enjoyed it. Keep shooting. Followed and Upvoted!