5 minutes freewrite : control (Underneath the dark blue sky.)
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From left to right,
Front to back,
Even with a 360 turn,
Everything is pitch black when it comes to darkness,
Eyelids can be felt,
Winking a few times,
But still there is no changes with the darkness around,
I took a step and then another,
I can feel then uneveness of the ground below me,
Then I shout for help but all that I can hear is my echo giving a reply,
Help, help... Help... Help...
And then it fade away,
I took my chance and keep on walking,
To where I'm not even sure,
Then I felt a breeze rushing towards me,
It kept me walking foward and forward though I hope it is the definite way out,
Look, the darkness is fading away,
There is a light far in front,
I kept on walking and almost running,
I'm losing control,
I fell, I slip,
Ouch.. It hurt so much,
I get up and I continue to walk,
Towards the light,
O my dear bright hope,
At last... Oh at last I'm free,
From this dark cave,
Next time... I will remember to bring...
Extra batery for my flashlight.
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