I really like this one. That stanza of single-word lines is great. I generally try to follow grammar rules in my poetry, but I really ought to break them, like you did here, since it can have such a powerful effect.
I really like this one. That stanza of single-word lines is great. I generally try to follow grammar rules in my poetry, but I really ought to break them, like you did here, since it can have such a powerful effect.
I found it so uncomfortable and strange to write in such a way. I understand you completely, as I tend to follow the grammatical rules (and if I break them, it tends to be unintentional). Sometimes breaking them does help the poem, but it might feel unnatural to do so. I'm glad you enjoyed it :3