[poem] young blood
You spout your fighting spirit.
the warmth I felt.
I was cold.
all because of you ..
blood.
You are in all my organs.
You surround me all my body
you're there for me
for us all
this pain arises
when I see my brother's blood coming.
my blood boils
as if rising from my bile
I want to fight
against those who oppress my brother
who had burned my sister
who had raped my sister
my greetings to the Palestinians
my greetings to the rohingya
my greetings to the Muslims of the world
my greetings to the citizens of the world warriors
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You use some powerful imagery here. I like the 'all because of you' line. To place the blame on the main idea, the thing on which your poem focuses, is brilliant. Well done, and keep up the good work!
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