Oh, I love this! I see the improvement when you say the "last grains slip". Slipping is a great verb here, it emphasises your point. This almost makes me want to try a tri-o-let myself; I might give it a try ;)
Oh, I love this! I see the improvement when you say the "last grains slip". Slipping is a great verb here, it emphasises your point. This almost makes me want to try a tri-o-let myself; I might give it a try ;)
You should try it out, they're fun!
Just uh, need to remember about the whole 8 syllable thing. cough cough
Thank you for swinging by and enjoying my words.