Poem / God

in #poetry7 years ago

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Cringe the hate we do desecrate
In order to laugh as angels
A language that God did create

A fairytale we try to make
That shows the nothingness of trials
To live and die in life's earthquake

Of specific boundries ache
Thus, we try to make history
To touch the fingertips that shake

The above to mis-match and take
Our God, the living creator
In all love we present to fake

He-She- who cares in what we make?
The timeline of space is fiction
To all who touch and replicate

Believe and find immortality
In goodness and the trinity
Pass the test of God's humility

By: Shannon

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Nice poem buddy it's always good to have a fresh view in life.

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Believe and find immortality
In goodness and the trinity
Pass the test of God's humility

That's good. Someone is showing off their rhyming skill.

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Spectacular and very good poem enchanted me with very important words for all the human beings of that planet as it is the humility, thanks for sharing it greetings

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