Huh. I like this. No reason why, I just do. (this is a compliment I swear! your verse is very uncontrived and natural, jealous)
It've mostly work in prose but have tried my hand at verse lately, I would enjoy your opinion on this https://steemit.com/writing/@mitthradiumn/penny-for-your. I know the last line is lame but it feels neccessary as the tone spirals into pretension. Any feedback welcome really.
Haha... thanks @mitthradiumn. I'm a big fan of your writing also, very interesting stuff. Like I said in my other message I welcome any feedback on my stuff, whether critical or non. I really liked the post you made about creative opening lines on Tinder the other day (guess I should've commented there!) I'll go check out piece for sure!