Finding Your Path…
like a walk in the park
a stroll
under the stars
on the way
to your destiny
that thing.., that
is you
challenging the fate
that effortlessly
awaits
as they make it all sound
not as
straight forward
when you're looking
to be found
requires falling
on your face
understanding in time
you're not
running a race
that's unfolding
can be read
or written
the choices you make
not always a given
dancing in your head
all those
unmade choices
connected
by a thread
of the
still unknown
anxiously waiting
to step out
on their own
of exploring
new joys
begging for silence
but met
with more noise
what's left
in the aftermath
is all just
part of
finding your path…
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love to read it .........
CHEERS!
welcome!!!!
Just found this again and miss you !!!!
in all the struggles in between i am finding my path :D
nice poem thanks for sharing
All the struggles are just part a part of it... :))
i loved reading this poem very nice work
Thanks @cityslicker!
There is so much truth here.
You've touched on the whole range of existence from the important thread of connection to begging for silence.
Thanks @merej99 -- all just part of the journey... :))
wonderfull so so awesome poem and i also like it very much @macksby
Thanks @shencoin.., always love to read your very generous comments... ))
whats a great poem i appriciate you for this great words and i agree on all the words
Thanks @robrowe.., glad you liked it!
its too birlliant to read this poem and hope every one understand and think on it after read this poem
Great comment.., and much appreciated. Thanks for your insight @kellyrose!
Very romantic poetry with lot of emotions.
Thank you...
Der Weg ist das Ziel!
You got that right!!!
Thought so :)
This is a gem!
Such a powerful message made with only some letters and rows..hehe.
Thanks for sharing with us! Keep on doing what you love!
Thanks @spellmaker.., appreciate it!