Surrender All :: A Poem

jrswab (66)in #poetry • 6 years ago (edited)

Weak, faint, feeble
fragile shatters glass
broken pieces drifting
across empty plains
you see me whole
past my mess
past my pain
fall into your strength
nothing can be done
surrendering all to you
for you've already won

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6 years ago in #poetry by jrswab (66)

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aineyann (58) 6 years ago

Adore it :] !!!!
Perfectly Rhymed and a lot said in just a few lines of a troubled spirit , who by their present choices are moving forward ( or is it a step back!) :]

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jrswab (66) 6 years ago

Thanks for reading!

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aineyann (58) 6 years ago

my pleasure, I really enjoyed it! Beautiful words :]

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wandrnrose7 (65) 6 years ago

Beautiful in it's wonderful truth. Well spoken.

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jrswab (66) 6 years ago

Thank you! I figured you would know where I was coming from <3

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wandrnrose7 (65) 6 years ago

I certainly do.<3

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rodeo670 (61) 6 years ago

Dude, I seriously love how you write your poems! They're always so short and succinct yet they always bring so much depth! Another great poem, @jrswab! :)