Elixir Of Life ~ An Original Poem

in poetry •  16 days ago

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dark elixir of life
fill mind with youth
fill bones with vigor
goblet empties every sip
mind says cherish every drip

blood demands reaction
eyes dilate every guzzle
fog of morn departing gaze
stomach rumbles callous
staring an empty chalice


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This is so deep. I love all of it. Resteemed

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A thousand times, thanks!

Awesome poetry, dear.

fog of morn departing gaze
stomach rumbles callous
staring an empty chalice

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Thank you!

I enjoyed this poem, the first half was my favorite part.

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Thanks for reading! I think I like the first half more as well. <3

It is really lively and sweet on discord...you guys make writing amazing..thank you @jrswab for these beautiful links.

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Any time mate!

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Good to have you..followed

I like this, @jrswab, for the economy of language & its momentum. Good enough to reward rereading, back to back.

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Wow! Thank you so much for the kind words <3