Yes or No?
And you’ve been silent
It seems I can ask for anything
And you’ll reply
But not this one thing
And I don’t know why.
I remember times I’d come home exhausted
And fall into bed, too tired to talk
But you’d wait quietly and inevitably
I’d mumble a word or two and then, you’d start
It was always that way between us—
I’d talk and you’d listen
But you always acknowledged my presence,
You’d always be ready with an answer
So much so that yes or no
Didn’t even really matter.
I miss those times now
And I really need your help
This is not the time to close up
And withhold yourself
When you go quiet I start to fear
And that will just trigger tears
And we don’t want that
So make it easy on yourself
Just tell me yes or no out loud.
It sounds like the answer is one that will deliver pain and yet silence delivers it just as aptly. Nothing like being on tender hooks.
yes, it's actually a conversation with God - Guess I was too subtle with this one
The thought did occur to me, but there also is a sense of domesticity and romance past it best before date running through the piece. So really I would say the poem works on two levels. I am of the belief that almost all romantic poems are at their root about our relationship with the divine. We just don't tend to know it:)We seek for the 'heavenly' in the physical.
a very good point, Pryde :)
Really heartfelt poetry, silence is very lonely as is feeling invisible🐓
so true...thanks
Beautiful and very heartfelt @johnjgeddes
thank you
Your welcome :) Can you check my poem as well. It's not well written but I'm trying @johnjgeddes :)
what inspired you to right this? you're missing someone close to your heart?
Very creative i would say ,but i don't understand what kind of a relationship that would be , yes or no is not good enough , what about confort.
I honestly think it's very creative
One word, FANTASTIC!
just perfect!!
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