Remembrance

in #poetry5 years ago



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There’s no language
For abandonment,
Loneliness, longing—


Other than the mist
Clad in gray on the hill

And your words
That emanate from darkness,
Sudden as spring rain
When nights are still.

Others may touch
The surface of your skin,
But I reach places
Where your loneliness ends.

And I alone know this poverty.

But what can I give you
If not these words
No one has taught me?

My love for you
Turns everything
Black and white
So I can see
Only faintly
The tumult
You cause me,

Yet I must tell you—

These feelings
Run deep
And often contrary;

You excite me
The way the sun ripples
The wind
Among the red poppies.



© 2018, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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Beautiful, a very interesting filling and brimming with freshness and naturalness.

I feel these verses impregnated with nostalgia, silence and solitude. I don't believe that love can turn everything into black and white, on the contrary I think that love can be of many colors including passion red. The red that wakes up tremulous emotions and wraps of magic to great loves. Let's live the multicolored love that makes our lives happy. Greetings, friend.

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