mind zones

in a vast forest of sounds;
my fine-tuned senses
scan the night.
somewhere a storm
scatters static on a radio band,
somewhere a tree
iridescent with rain
is a luminous patch
on my radar screen.

in a vast forest of sounds;
my fine-tuned senses
scan the night.
somewhere a storm
scatters static on a radio band,
somewhere a tree
iridescent with rain
is a luminous patch
on my radar screen.
Now I'm jonesing for a rainy night with the windows open, the damp wind blowing in, and the mellow rolling of distant thunder...
😄😇😄

i posted last night thunderstorm lightning pictures check em out u would love it
always love distant thunder at night :)
that's actually quite poetic, creatr
Curiosity of the night. :)
nights can be beautiful
This is an interesting write with great imagery and a mysterious atmosphere. I enjoyed the setting put forth y this piece. Thanks for sharing.
you're welcome
words worth world <3
:)
This reminds me of when my son was playing high school football. My wife and I had seats right at the top of the stands under the press-box and with the school band seated off to our right. But during the game with loudspeakers blaring and 1500 fans screaming, cheerleaders chanting and drummers drumming, my son out in the middle of that field could make out his petite moms voice above that raucous cacophony.
and that is the power of natural bonds
Atmospheric words , i like the idea of a vast forest of sounds.
thank you, @opheliafu