Hidden love.
My Original poetry By @jie28
Disclaimers The Photo is Mine @jie28
My love does not mean to say, because it's frightening to its effect. Because I know I do not deserve your love. But it's my heart that keeps you busy. How can I confess to my chosen one I love you very much? It will be hidden from the gloom. I was afraid of my rage. But every moment you are looking for, so I want to say that I would love your heart to love.
One day I would have the courage to say that I was feeling emotionally. And maybe the sun is gone forever free of love if only pure is given.
@jie28. Hi friend. I like your poem. But I wouldlike you write t in other way, something like this:
My love does not mean to say,
because it's frightening to its effect.
Because I know
Ido not deserve your love.
............
Excuse me, but I think your poem will look better in that way.
Annd please, excuse me.
Have a nice day and write a lot of poems. I´m writing poems too, but in Spanish
Your welcome my friend. no problem thank you for your great guide. I was only practicing my talent if I have hihihi. But I will follow to your nice advice Hugs my friend. Advance Merry Christmas @mllg Everyone deserve to be love. I am so sorry to hear that but because i am all alone. a desperate Guy from nothing.
Be sure. You have it.
Have a nice day
Thank you
interesting post!
Thank you so much @bitshares101