are you feelin' it

in #poetry4 years ago

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are you feelin' it


our subconscious is lined with cocaine of fear and doubt which we often overlook while we live in our conscious minds. it shuffles through every single emotion you experienced and reveals what you're truly afraid of. all the insecurities, the absolute truth. our vision is no longer covered with a rosy slide in front of it. lifted, sighted, understood. this dependence has gone too far. curbing this addiction, putting everything in perspective once again. my heart feels light now, the nervousness has subsided. let's be thankful to our subconscious because it's always right.

it's weird. it's electrifying.
i've only just met you but this magnetism we both possess,
it's drawing us to each other with such immense force.
this attraction seems so natural.
our perceptions clicked, our eyes met.
the body language shows all.
it seems i've finally found someone who understands what i want...
the sensuality, the stability, the passion.
but here's the catch - when i saw your hand, i know this is a territory where danger lies ahead.
there won't be no crossing over the boundary.
i would never allow myself.
but why, oh why... what have i gotten myself into?
i wish this is all just an illusion.

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Don't close your eyes @honeybee
If you do that, you can't see the world

I am feeling it.

Yea, the unconscious is where our true self lies. Sometimes we do things we never think we could have done but the unconscious has been piling up the very very little thoughts and actions till finally it sparked in the conscious.

So painful loving someone and finally realize it was never meant to be. That they were not who we thought they were.

I feel it!

@honeybee

Hay dear, I am spiritual healing expert. I can treat you.

Yea, the unconscious is where our true self lies. Sometimes we do things we never think we could have done but the unconscious has been piling up the very very little thoughts and actions till finally it sparked in the

i fell it

This was awesome. The subconscious doesn't have an off switch like our conscious does when we sleep. So be very wary what you hear, see, and think.

Interesting read , it's amazing to think the sibcontious takes so much in without us contiously being aware of it! Nice share thank you 👍

Awesome choice of words @honeybee..

We do mostly what our subconscious tell us and generally listen to it. But then what do we feel after listening and believing it?

A never ending series of counter-wishes as depicted by the last three lines in the second stanza

..."oh why... what have i gotten myself into?
i wish this is all just an illusion."

You've got talent..

Very deep !!You can't stop reading till the end :)

Fantastic poetry you shared, @honeybee, very nicely you expressed your feelings in poetic way. Impressive writing.UPVOTE

Beautiful poetry in a dedicated work of literature, a solemn poem is a solace for the wounded heart, yet we are not always dissolved in sorrow, for real life is a reality.
By the way your literary works are so beautiful
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Yes we could be dictated by fear(emotion) because we have built up that pattern. Very possible for all, as we all have our survival mechanism to protect us but it does not know the differences of actual danger or not.

We must understand and become aware of how our body and minds work. Then we can control it and choose the life we want.

Very impressive sir your words can make the world so peaceful

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is it cocaine of fear and doubt
or fear and doubt of cocaine

I have the same question. Doubt. Fear. Cocaine. Could be all of em!

Well written @honeybee! I get it, big time. I just got onto Steemit,.... you're one of the first I'll follow! Looking for more from both of us!

excellent! i like it i hope i can write like this.

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