Haiku [ITA/ENG]
Original by @f3nix - 11.08.2018
mirando pietre austere
suona l'assenza
between austere stones
absence sounds
mirando pietre austere
suona l'assenza
between austere stones
absence sounds
mirando pietre austere
suona l'assenza
between austere stones
absence sounds
Mi fa piacere che tu sia ritornato a postare, con il ben meritato banner di vincitore del Mizu No Oto contest, che è riconfermato anche da questo nuovo haiku.
Presto anche io ricomincerò a postare, sembra che la patch conceda abbastanza libertà d'azione.
Grazie Marco! Let the show continue! In quest'haiku ho resistito all'ultimo ad inserire un "più della pietra..l'assenza" per ovvi motivi. Mi sono salvato in corner hahaha
Dziękuję! Now it's time to submit something to CI me thinks..
There is a beautiful resonance to your Haiku @f3nix
And a fantastic economy of words that your Haiku always exhibit, there is never any extraneous noise with too many clanging adverbs and yammering adjectives taking up all the space.
Great stuff :-)
First of all thank you for another precious comment, my friend. I enjoy the minimalism and absence of judgement.. The 3-5-3 structure, instead of the 5-7-5, not only is feasible in English but also more appropriate. Now I can develop a poetry for every haiku... I should start first or after ;-)
Amazing how powerful a picture with the right words can be.
The pic is powerful because that sudden appearance of the Beseno's Castle literally overwhelmed me. You should see it in real, bud.. when you come visiting us in Italy maybe ;-)
Sounds fun. Always wanted to see Roman ruins. And in the spirit of the season "Le Streghe". What an amazing movie!
That's medieval, but also Roman architecture is awesome.. I never saw le streghe, dang!!
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