The Barrier Of Love
The heart is full of whirlpools of emotional waterfalls, we are tired of the happy moments that come with rainy days. We have disappeared in the ego and the perfect limit, get out of the frame of false passion and believe in yourself - Climb to the top of knowledge and great glory.
Honor has become cheap on the market of false values, we have sunk in the waves of material satisfaction. The truth is heard in the clouds of our passion, choose your path to higher goals above the limits of the possible - Beauty has become an idol of new generations.
We hide the feelings behind the walls of the false heart, our consciousness plays on the podium of illusion. Believe in people with a pure heart, angels sing the song of freedom, which we received at the beginning of our life - The boundaries move towards the starry ocean.
Money has become an icon of success, changes the moral code to a better value, digital numbers change our minds - we are becoming addicts of the new era. Love breaks all false boundaries, love is the main force of the universe -
Modesty is the greatest virtue.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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This particular poem is filled with emotions and reality of the present world
Yea they're few happy moments that comes with rainy days and many of such happiness are those that make people a little scared of being happy. In this present days honor have actually become cheap to get with little or no value and regards. "Money has become the icon of success" and no one really cares about any other meaningful quality of another a lot of people want to change with the era forgetting the value of the past but yes love can break these barriars and boundaries that is why i usually say "when the world learn to love each other then it will know peace".
Queen, this is awesome comment, thank you very much
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Wow.. Your style of writing is quite unique. I mean it appears simple but cerebrally tasking.
This is more like an heart cry as regards playing the right values where they belong. Not replacing values with what the present era proposes.
Thank you very much for nice words.
Great and mind opening words and you said truth we are moving away from humanity means we are really created to live the natural life but nowadays days we are living an life of rat race don't know what to achieve and we don't have time to spend with our close one's and we spend most of the time into virtual world. Most of us running behind money and material aspects but we are forgetting that when we will leave this world we will have empty hands, so understanding of true life is really important and that is living natural life and love, means we have to spread love and kindness. Thanks for sharing and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂
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Honour has become cheap on the market of false values. Money has become the icon of success. My heart bleeds when i realized the extent at which these lines are true. They are so true that i am even scared for our children's generation. Nice piece.
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Thank you so much @dobartim.. means a lot to me
@dobartim I’m sure you made a mistake in your topic I’m pretty sure is love you meant to write! Nice write ups! The motto still remains We will win together 👉🏼
Of course, mistake - thank you
This is really great. Why do we keep hiding inside the shell of a egg when there's an internal force (love) that can break forth the shell and turn it to a chick, the beginning of greatness. Love is really a powerful force that breaks wall, propels passion and it's also a powerful binder. Thanks @dobartim for sharing this great lines of poem.
Thank you very much for this kind words, make one poetry
Wow great poetry. I don't know if people learn how to be poetic or it just comes naturally. If they do learn it I would love to learn it's beautiful.
Both, make one for start.
Okay thanks I will.
I love writing poems too. I won't deny that I found the poem's structure.....new. I didn't know you can do that. Indeed, poems come in any forms. With regards to the contents, it is very true in so many levels. The bitter truth. I hope my faith in humanity strengthens. Cheers
Good
Cheers
Uhmmmmm, real one
Make better comment, see you on the top
Pls i want to you teach me how things are done here , bcos have being posting without recieving anything here
Nice Story/Poetry @dobartim
Thank you very much